Feedback to Catch and Release Music Video Idea

I presented my idea to the class and collected feedback though the camera on my mobile telephone and trimmed as well as color graded it on Final Cut Pro though the use of a LUT loader.
I have compiled a list of the feedback into a list:
 
 Peers:
- Song is well known (problems with licensing)
- May be hard to work with young children 
- Hard to grantee good weather  
- Logistical problem with working with young kids
- Try using older children
- Simplify movements to make it easier for actors

Teacher:  
- Fire is hard to do legally, permit is impossible to get.
- Weather would be achievable but hard  
- Might be hard to work with bad weather
- What is visually appealing about children playing on the beach in the winter.
- consider using a drone to capture the coastline and other sequences
- NEED another element which is completely separate to the other elements    
- Because the shoot is all outdoors a indoors aspect is essential so that it can be controlled
- Tropical fake beach int he studio with cutaways to a real dull bleak dull and cold beach
- NEED a studio that is linked.